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Wygląda tak, Jak widzicie jeszcze jakieś błędy to dajcie proszę znać. =) :
"Mobile phones are very important to many people now, especially for citizens of developed countries. Development of new technologies has given us many wonderful opportunities and possibilities – Has changed classical mobile phones into portable computers, called “smartphones”.
Because of that they are the necessary tool used at work to fast communication and to provide text or multi-media informations
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@StretchyFrog: A no faktycznie, dzięki. =) Po wszystkich poprawkach. Czy widzisz tu jeszcze jakieś błędy?

"Mobile phones are very important to many people now, especially for citizens of developed countries. Development of new technologies has given us many wonderful opportunities and possibilities – Has changed classical mobile phones into portable computers, called “smartphones”.
Because of that they are the necessary tool used at work to enable fast communication and to
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@SkrajnieZdegustowany: chyba ok (moim zdaniem) To now jakoś tak dziwnie na końcu, możesz przesunąć przed very, albo wywalić i dać Nowadays, na początek. Chyba po myślniku to Has nie powinno być z wielkiej litery. The necessary tools (bo are - liczba mnoga) i chwile wczesniej dalbym przecinek po that. To chyba wszystko co znalazłem
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