Jak myślicie, wszystko dobrze opisane w Past Simple? At the beginning at the last year my parents wanted to go at the sea. I very like Baltic Sea so I thought that is very good idea. My dad booked a hotel and we were waited to the holidays. When holidays were started we were went to the hotel. When we came at the place turn out that all rooms in the hotel were busy. That was terrible information for us, but we were forced to back to home.
@kajdeg: Sporo błędów. Nie może tworzyć zdań typu "was/were forma z -ed" to nie jest Pas Simple, nie ma takiego czasu. Używaj zaimka "it". Hotel nie może być "busy" w znaczeniu "zapełniony, brakował miejsc"; najlepiej byłoby "was fully booked".
At the beginning of the last year my parents wanted to go at the sea. I very like Baltic Sea so I thought it is very good idea. My dad booked a hotel and we were waiting for the holidays. When holidays started we went to the hotel. When we came
@wdzwr: @kajdeg: At the beginning of the last year my parents decided that we'll spend our summer holiday at the seaside. I like Baltic Sea very much so I thought it was a good idea. My dad booked a hotel room and we couldn't wait to go there. When holidays started we got there but then it turned out that all the rooms were taken. We were really
@Fevx: @osmanho: @inka_niszczycielka: @wdzwr: no cóż, wychodzi na to, że musze poważnie zabrać się do przećwiczenia gramatyki i czasów. Dzięki serdeczne Wam wszystkim za pomoc!
@Fevx: co prawda, dopiero za dwa lata, jednak warto zacząć ćwiczyć jak najszybciej, tymbardziej że będzie się to też odbijać na moich ocenach cząstkowych
At the beginning at the last year my parents wanted to go at the sea. I very like Baltic Sea so I thought that is very good idea. My dad booked a hotel and we were waited to the holidays. When holidays were started we were went to the hotel. When we came at the place turn out that all rooms in the hotel were busy. That was terrible information for us, but we were forced to back to home.
@kajdeg: to mi się nie podoba
1 linijka - of the
3 - it is
4 - were waiting for
5 -
"We were waiting" poniewaz robilismy to jakis czas w przeszlosci, dlatego continous.
We went
Holidays started.
Inna rzecz, ze ja tam widze wiecej bledow...
Aha, i dla większej logiki wypowiedzi w ostatnim zdaniu uzyłbym zamiast but - because
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At the beginning of the last year my parents wanted to go at the sea. I very like Baltic Sea so I thought it is very good idea. My dad booked a hotel and we were waiting for the holidays. When holidays started we went to the hotel. When we came
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we were forced to go back home
niech ktos lepiej myslacy potwierdzi.
no i bez przecinka miedzy us a because.
I thought it was a very good idea
When the holidays